Sasaki Sayaka - Yume to Iro de Dekiteiru by eringiRa

ルフィ(35歳無職)「そうか…俺達の冒険は仮想現実のゲームだったのか…」

シャンクス「そうだ、実は俺は運営側の人間なんだルフィ、お前はワンピースを手に入れたからゲームをクリアしたんだ」

ルフィ「じゃあ俺の仲間たちは？」

シャンクス「とっくに目覚めてるぞ、お前が最後だ」

ゾロ(23歳 無職)「ルフィ！お前もこっちでは無職だったんだな！」
ナミ(44歳 風俗嬢)「楽しい冒険だったわよ！ルフィ！」
ウソップ(27歳 IT土方)「随分待ったぞ！起きるのが遅いぜルフィ！」
サンジ(31歳 外食)「ナミさんとロビンちゃんはまだ起きないのか？」
ロビン(37歳 ネカマ)「みんな起きたばかりなのに元気ねえ」
フランキー(55歳 整備士)「コーラで乾杯しようぜ！！」
ブルック(17歳 不登校)「ヨホホ！みなさん年上だったんですねぇ」

ルフィ「お前ら…！」

ルフィ「あれ？チョッパーは？」

シャンクス「あいつはNPCだ」

エース(40歳 無職)「よぉルフィ！お前ついにクリアしたんだな！」

ルフィ「！！！うお゛お゛お゛おおおおエースがい゛ぎでる！！！！」

エース「当たり前だろ！あれはゲームの世界なんだぜ！さあルフィ！もう一度ゲームをやろうぜ！今度は死んだりしねえぞ！！」

ルフィ「う゛ん！！！！！！」

ワンピース 完！！！！！！！！！

G.I: lack of contrast in chorus caused by verses being too similar to choruses.

From a quick glance we can see that the usage of spacing and density in the map is quite similar to how it is in its verses to choruses. I believe this creates an issue in map's contrast and the importance of the chorus, they're blending together in with the less intense parts in the song as a whole so the chorus doesnt stand out much from the rest.

For example:

When comparing 00:40:882 & 01:03:247 to 01:15:193 until break, there is a quite noticable similarity on how both of these sections play, 00:56:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - comparing this to 01:18:607 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this would be a clear example. the rhythm, movement and the spacing doesnt really change much apart from a few circles added as 1/2 to follow vocals which makes the rhythm slightly, but seems insufficient to help chorus stand out from the verses. Which is caused due to the constant 1/4 and 3/4 usage in the verses 00:40:882 (1,2,3) - 00:41:421 (4,5) - 00:45:193 (1,2,3) - 00:46:631 (1,2,3) - etc.

00:48:607 (4,5) - 00:51:301 (3,4) - 00:55:613 (3,4) - these spacings feel quite overwhelming due to it's similar and smaller spacing usage in the kiais later on like 01:22:559 (1,2,3) - 03:52:020 (1,2,3,4,1) - and it is quite clear that the vocal intensity as well as the instruments are way more prominent than it is on the verses.

the same could be said for 02:01:361 to 02:21:481 - but especially 02:02:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the entirety of this part of the verse because one of the guitars that are prominent and used throughout the entire verse is missing, therefore it feels more underwhelming to have similar contrast with the chorus/verse with the guitar.

aint gonna bother reading either comment below but im sure ponbot speaks more fax than aranel

whos stopping me

i thought this was mapped by cami