1) A really consistent map and I like that. However, the number of ideas represented could be bigger. A lot of patterns (including streams which are the main thing of the map) repeat too many times. I wish less streams were based on geometrical shapes (e.g., circles) in order to be cooler. It’s too hard to maintain making cool and creative patterns when you base them around geometry. I wish there were more streams like 03:06:661 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5), 03:25:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), 03:26:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) etc and also more wiggle streams or streams that overlap themselves. The streams I’ve mentioned are really nice and I’m sure you are able to do more of such. Same point about geometry goes with other patterns. As I think, it would be much better if there were less patterns like 01:40:495 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4). Coming up with ideas besides copying a certain slider is crucial (same with streams, a lot of them just represent a curved or a straight line).
2) I appreciate the colorhax you’ve made. Also, the idea of making the first half of the map colorless and then bursting with colors in the kiai is amazing. Not many people can come up with that, I think, and not many teams colorhaxed their entries in the first place. However, color usage could be definitely better. For this “bursting” effect being more dramatic, you should’ve chosen brighter colors. The first half is dense and loud enough to have it emphasized with white and gray, you could’ve used some light brown maybe or a similar neutral color. Also in the hardparts you could’ve made a part where more than 2 colors are being used (e.g. blue, red, yellow and white). 5/110
1) A really consistent map and I like that. However, the number of ideas represented could be bigger. A lot of patterns (including streams which are the main thing of the map) repeat too many times. I wish less streams were based on geometrical shapes (e.g., circles) in order to be cooler. It’s too hard to maintain making cool and creative patterns when you base them around geometry. I wish there were more streams like 03:06:661 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5), 03:25:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), 03:26:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) etc and also more wiggle streams or streams that overlap themselves. The streams I’ve mentioned are really nice and I’m sure you are able to do more of such. Same point about geometry goes with other patterns. As I think, it would be much better if there were less patterns like 01:40:495 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4). Coming up with ideas besides copying a certain slider is crucial (same with streams, a lot of them just represent a curved or a straight line).
2) I appreciate the colorhax you’ve made. Also, the idea of making the first half of the map colorless and then bursting with colors in the kiai is amazing. Not many people can come up with that, I think, and not many teams colorhaxed their entries in the first place. However, color usage could be definitely better. For this “bursting” effect being more dramatic, you should’ve chosen brighter colors. The first half is dense and loud enough to have it emphasized with white and gray, you could’ve used some light brown maybe or a similar neutral color. Also in the hardparts you could’ve made a part where more than 2 colors are being used (e.g. blue, red, yellow and white). 5/110