Asaka - Eternal Star (TV Size) by -Hitomi

quite a bit of "youre not hanzer" moments but its funny

For the top diff, it would be really nice if you couldve done some additives for the kiai it feels really empty! Particulary for these vocals 01:04:581 - 01:16:689. As for the intro the doubles feel pretty out of place and i dont understand why it wasnt done here 00:08:738.

But i respect what this was going for! I was a big fan of this 00:58:798 (1,1,2,1,2). Just try and develop your ideas more (eg a more consistent and less abrasive way of implementing blue tick rhythm & a way of emphasising the peaks of the song better) and it could be really cool.