Asaka - Eternal Star (TV Size) by -Hitomi

For the top diff, it would be really nice if you couldve done some additives for the kiai it feels really empty! Particulary for these vocals 01:04:581 - 01:16:689. As for the intro the doubles feel pretty out of place and i dont understand why it wasnt done here 00:08:738.

But i respect what this was going for! I was a big fan of this 00:58:798 (1,1,2,1,2). Just try and develop your ideas more (eg a more consistent and less abrasive way of implementing blue tick rhythm & a way of emphasising the peaks of the song better) and it could be really cool.

quite a bit of "youre not hanzer" moments but its funny